I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia ora Noa - I liked the way you transitioned between your slides. You sound like such a lovely big brother! They must really enjoy their time with you! - Whāea Nicky
Hello Noa. I like your cool hair cut in the picture. You worked hard on your all about me.. I play hide and seek with my brother sometimes if he’s awake. There’s a hiding place in my mum’s bedroom behind the mattress. I like your hard work you did in it good job.
Hi Noa. I like your all about me, Me and my brothers like to play hide and seek as well. Instead of saying and my teachers name is Mrs Batey you can put a comma. from melique
Kia ora Noa, my name is Taito from Owairaka District School in Auckland. I remember doing something like this. I like to play hide and seek as well. Do you like counting or hiding? Thank you for sharing your blog post about all about me slides. You should check out my blog please copy and paste this (https://odsmaok.blogspot.com/) Blog ya later Blog out- Taito
Kia ora Noa - I liked the way you transitioned between your slides. You sound like such a lovely big brother! They must really enjoy their time with you! - Whāea Nicky
ReplyDeleteHello Noa.
ReplyDeleteI like your cool hair cut in the picture. You worked hard on your all about me..
I play hide and seek with my brother sometimes if he’s awake. There’s a hiding place in my mum’s bedroom behind the mattress.
I like your hard work you did in it good job.
Thank you tomai for complementing my hair cut.
DeleteHi Noa.
ReplyDeleteI like your all about me,
Me and my brothers like to play hide and seek as well.
Instead of saying and my teachers name is Mrs Batey you can put a comma. from melique
Thanks for your help i will remember to put a comma.
DeleteKia ora Noa, my name is Taito from Owairaka District School in Auckland. I remember doing something like this. I like to play hide and seek as well. Do you like counting or hiding? Thank you for sharing your blog post about all about me slides. You should check out my blog please copy and paste this (https://odsmaok.blogspot.com/) Blog ya later
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Taito
Hi TAITO,my name is Noa and I go to Otaki school, and I would prefer hiding.Thank you for commenting on my blog,bye.
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