I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia Ora Noa, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
The Harwood Hole sounds like a truly fascinating cave-structure in New Zealand. Imagine abseiling down the hole to the very bottom. It would be so dark but I think you would see some incredible things like the glow worms and stalactites you have mentioned.
I like that you have included a list of things explorers need if they go down the hole. Thank you for including an explanation of what these tools are used for, it really helps your reader understand what is necessary to go on such an expedition. I also really like how you have dispersed images throughout your text. They really appeal to your readers.
Do you know any more facts about the Harwood Hole? Perhaps how deep it is or where specifically it is located. Would you ever abseil down the hole?
Kia Ora Noa, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteThe Harwood Hole sounds like a truly fascinating cave-structure in New Zealand. Imagine abseiling down the hole to the very bottom. It would be so dark but I think you would see some incredible things like the glow worms and stalactites you have mentioned.
I like that you have included a list of things explorers need if they go down the hole. Thank you for including an explanation of what these tools are used for, it really helps your reader understand what is necessary to go on such an expedition. I also really like how you have dispersed images throughout your text. They really appeal to your readers.
Do you know any more facts about the Harwood Hole? Perhaps how deep it is or where specifically it is located. Would you ever abseil down the hole?
Hei konā mai,
Shannon